This Is The Ending To A Book Called "On The Edge" Writtem By Gillian Cross .My Teacher Wanted Short Sentances And Long Sentances And Very Descriptive Writing. I Covered All The Criteria Needed And Got An A Which I Was Happy With

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"On The Edge" - My Ending

"On The Edge" - My Ending

11.00am

-But before he could answer her, there was a noise outside. A car was coming up the track at high speed, creaking and groaning as it went over the bumps. The woman looked out. "Doyle's back?" she said, sounding puzzled.

Tug knew that this was his last chance of freedom, his one last chance to find out who he really is. He took one glimpse at the girl and gave her a sorry look, Doyle barged through the door and before he could think, his legs were already sprinting along the drive-way. Tug didn't know where he was going but his legs seemed to be making the decisions for him, he had a vague idea where his legs were taking him, as long as he kept running he was happy. No matter how much it hurt he must get there…but where? Tug himself had no idea, all he knew was that he was gaining something.

11.00am - Meanwhile

Jinny was in shock. She made for the door but the man slammed it shut and grabbed her arm so tight she could feel the blood circulation in her hand stop. She didn't know what to do, there was no way out, now that Liam Shakespeare is safe they won't think twice about me. She thought. "Get the radio and take the girl upstairs!" Doyle bellowed. "No one gets in or out of here! I have kept my patience with the boy until now, until you let the boy go!" It was then when Jinny realised that Doyle was normally a calm person when angry, it was now when Jinny realised that she was in BIG trouble. Jinny was screaming for help in her mind, hoping that someone could hear her silent cries.

Obeying Doyle, the woman grabbed the radio, grabbed Jinny's arm and hauled them both upstairs. Looking back in the corner of her eye Jinny caught sight of the man clutching tightly to a gun. How could things get any worse? Thought Jinny. She knew that Liam had been locked in for much longer than she had but somehow she still felt like Liam had abandoned her. Had he gone to get help maybe? Jinny thought. At that moment all three of them heard sirens.

Yes. Jinny hoped. Yes, yes, yes. Everything's going to be alright. There was just a small gut feeling that something was going to go, terribly wrong. "Sir this is the armed police. Do as we say and we will not take aim. If...

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